Soaringflame of ThunderClan

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Name: Soaringflame
Gender: She-cat
Moons: 24
Rank: Warrior
Clan/Land: Thunderclan
Description:

A stunning light orange tabby with calm amber/orange eyes to go with. Her long, sleek and slick pelt lets her glide through the underbrush un-harmed. Soaringflame has a longer than normal tail that gives her extra balence. There is a black stripe that runs throughout the tail that maked it look worth staring at. Her soft underbelly and chest has no stripes on it. A slender, but light body and long, muscled lets her run long distances without a problem. This is a disadvantage in battle though. Short fur covers Soaringflame, and can be fuffed out to make her look twice the size. Her right front paw is a dark ginger color. When the sun hits her pelt sometimes, it looks like fire.

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History // Past:

History:
Kithood: Soaringkit was the youngest and the daughter of Mothdazzel and Rustyclaw. She had two brothers, Eaglekit and Hawkkit. She was born in leaffall. Eaglekit always bossed Soaringkit around so she got used to being told what to do. Her other brother, Hawkkit, mostly hid in the shadows, ignored. When ever Soaringflame tried to include Hawkkit, he just gave her a cold, serios face and meowed, " No thank you.." Then turned around and ran into the forest.

Apprenticehood: Soaringpaw became an apprentice at 6 moons of age. Her mentor, Kesteralclaw, started training right away. She trained long and hard, and put effort into everything she did. Her mentor was amazed when she when over and above for everything. She made up her own tricks for hunting and new moves for battle. Soaringpaw did all of this for her clan. A smart young cat like her knew that if she worked hard, then she would becaome a great warrior, please the clan. Hawkpaw got a mentor that would make him be more of an outgoing cat, and soon he wasn't hiding in the shadows any more. However, Eaglepaw watched her every move, and prevented her from having every friends.
Warriorhood: Just after she got her warrior name, Soaringflame (flame was given to her because of her pelt and her effort. Soaringflame had changed alot than when she was a kit. For example, she had become stronger and bigger, and smarter.
Then one cold leaf bare day, a group of badgers came

Personality:

Role Playing Example:

Example #1:



(If that one doesn't meet your standers, then here is a 2nd one.)

Soaringflame scilently padded through the forest, concentrating on putting one paw infront of the other lightly so that no noise was made. I know this will help me in the future, so I'd better master it well and soon. Soaringflames's eyes glanced at the sun. I've been practicing this since dawn and it's almost sun high. I have to go back to camp and lead a border patrol to RiverClan's borders. The patrolls have been increased there because RiverClan was getting a little ansy over Sunningrocks. Soaringflame's anger rose as her paws started to stomp through the forest. Her paws abruptly came to a halt. Anger had flared up in her eyes as her pelt started to bistle. Slashing from side to side thoughts ran through Soaringflame's head. I don't know why RiverClan want to have Sunning rocks. All they use it for is warming their pelts, but ThunderClan will use it for

Theme Song:
Code Word: Twisted Warrior
Biography Completion: No

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So is Soaringflame done?